Okay well today I wrote a poem and I wanted to get your comments on it so just tell me if you want me to continue to writing poems I tried to post it as a deviation but the file woulden't go through but my poem is called I like it when you are quiet.
I Like It When you are Quiet
I like you when you are quiet
I like you when you are quiet because it is a though you are absent,
and you hear me from far away , and my voice does not touch you.
It looks as though your eyes had flown away
and it looks as if a kiss had sealed your mouth
Like all things are full of my soul
You emerge from the things, of my soul.
Dream butterfly , you look li